Thanks for the comment. I re posted this picture with a "repaired" noose, I added a needed portion. The scene does not have to look like an actual picture, I just try to get it looking close. Does it look realistic to you, or not? Any suggestions?
I'm not an artist, so no suggestions. I had to look at several pictures full size before I realized the pictures were doctored. I think what gave it away was one noose looked a little "cartooney". It was one of the earliest ones.
Thanks for the feedback, I posted a second version of this picture where the noose is drawn better. Right, I get better with experience. I'm only working with PowerPoint and some noose pictures I took.